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Feb 5
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They.
They think that I’m invisible
They act like I’m not there
They just keep on walking by
They don’t give a care
No one sees the real me
It’s locked up, deep inside
Lost forever, hidden away
Kept safe from, prying eyes
Even those who think they know me
Have me sussed, without a doubt
Are just looking at my shadow
No one knows me inside out
I wish that these people could truly see
The awful damage they do to me
My mind in pieces covers the floor
I feel so alone, so helpless, so poor
Those base, ignorant fools
Who turned my heart to tatters
It’s no surprise, I seek revenge
I want their heads on platters
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You have some powerful imagery and emotions there, PD. Not something that you hand in in writing class, I'm thinking.
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Penthesilea wrote
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You have some powerful imagery and emotions there, PD. Not something that you hand in in writing class, I'm thinking.
not really, but I did send all my poems to my teacher and she's publishing one in my school rag this week hopefully!
most of my poems are based on feelings i've dreged up from the past, but some of them, like this one were inspired by my friends. when I wrote this I was talking to him on MSN messenger and I could feel his emotions, especially as he'd been beaten up earlier that week.
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I read the three you have right now and they are all good but this one is by far my favorite.
http://www.mysticwicks.com/attachment.phpattachmentid=53328&stc=1&&
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everyone seems to like this one...it's being published in the MW magazine
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my school one.
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I can see why.
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explain...(so I can try and make more like it...)
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Its like, its umm......aluring like look at the weakness then it turns around to grab the upper hand.
I just like dark and revenge and this has both. I am not normal though
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neither am I though :p
I occasionally try to write nice happy poems but they lack the emotion i put into these ones.
I felt great satisfaction after writing that one.
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That poem you wrote spoke volumes about how I felt in middle school. People only see the "mentally retarded" scapegoat they love to pick on, never seeing the real person who has feelings, who doesn't want to cause trouble, who only wants to get through the day alive. I only want to live my life just like everyone else.
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