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May 31st, 2007 at 7:41pm
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tears awakening high
finding a place through the sky
falling down like tears upon my eyes
downward to the ground.
dragons hide
dragons cry
earth shatters at their cry
winds howel at their fears
waters calm the great beast
the fire heals the sould
the spirit forever lives on.

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Reply #1 - Jun 1st, 2007 at 12:17pm
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very nice. Looks great, do you have more? Very strong use of words.
  

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Reply #2 - Jun 4th, 2007 at 2:58pm
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Forgotten Friend
He stood by my side,
He was there when I was sad,
He was there forgotten,
His loyalty is still pure.
In his last year,
In his final dream,
I showed my loyalty.
I have seen deaths work,
The dead so fearfull yet peaceful,
To understand life,
We first must bury our strife.
The dog named mischiefe forgotten,
Only to be remembed as a friend,
To only reveal a friend in lines,
So let him be the friend untold.


  

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Reply #3 - Jun 4th, 2007 at 2:59pm
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Dragons fire
The world unknown
The creature unseen
To know life a mystery
To only bring misery.
Dragons come and dragons help
That is the true fire within the dragon.
See not for they come to you
Fear not for they see you as friends and not enemy's
For they are here to help you till betrayal.
Life is only a mystery
So don't go into misery and help those that helped you.
  

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Reply #4 - Jun 4th, 2007 at 3:00pm
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Beauty
Earths tears awakening high,
Falls deeply into it's self,
Tears freeze in the air,
What was left was frozen ice.
Falling gently to the earth,
Seeking a place to land,
Only to find what they really are.
Beauty in the tears of earth covers the icy land,
To reveal what we what we forgot a long time ago,
Tears covered trees of ice and death,
What we forgot we remember.
What comes death of an icy hand comes life in new times sands,
To repeat the cycle of life is in beauty it's self.
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