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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #750 - Jan 26^th, 2016 at 5:00am	Print Post
	Did a little work tonight, mostly editing. Not as glamorous as adding new material but it has to be done at some point and I'd rather do it as I go along.


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #751 - Jan 27^th, 2016 at 6:21am	Print Post
	Did a little more editing tonight. I didn't get as much done as I'd hoped due to having to break up confrontations between the cats. sigh Feline relations are improving but they still seem to be working out the "pecking order".


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #752 - Jan 30^th, 2016 at 2:24am	Print Post
	I've been trying to "punch up" the FINAL BATTLE between Our Heroine and That Bitch without much success. So I've opened a new word document and I'm starting from scratch. So far, all I've kept in the opening sentence in which Our Heroine charges after the Bitch and her captive -- Our Hero. I've just thrown an armed and vicious "roadblock" in her way and I'm going to wash a few dishes while I think about what happens next......


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #753 - Jan 30^th, 2016 at 3:21am	Print Post
	Had an idea about what happens a bit farther on. A change of POV seems to be in order. Maybe three POVs. That would certainly mix things up especially since everyone is fighting for their lives and only two will be left standing..... I don't need to tell you which two, do I?


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #754 - Jan 30^th, 2016 at 6:12am	Print Post
	Slow going since I'm working things out in my head before committing them to text but progress is being made. I guess I'm not going to be one of those writers that cranks out several repetitive potboilers a year. That suits me just fine. For one thing, I prefer to produce quality work as opposed to large quantities of drek -- which is too often the case when a writer driven by ego tries to meet an impossible production standard. For another thing, I have interests other than writing. "Obsessive/Compulsive Writer" does not describe me! "All write and no play" makes Penth a dull girl! Fortunately, several of my interests -- like swords� --play into the kind of writing I do so it is kinda like "research". The authors I admire the most have other interests that are reflected in their work: raptor rehabilitation, martial arts, swordsmanship and, of course..... GAMING! hehehe So I guess I'm aspiring to be in good company!


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #755 - Jan 31^st, 2016 at 8:54pm	Print Post
	Okay. Our Hero who was a mind-controlled prisoner/sex slave has broken free and joined the fight on the side of Our Heroine. Time for a bloodbath.......


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #756 - Feb 2^nd, 2016 at 6:18am	Print Post
	Still working on the bloodbath. I have a large number of possible scenarios for this fight that can be combined in any number of ways and sorting through them is taking some time. I completed the rough shaping on my new Hellion's grip today so I'll have to find another way to keep my hands busy while I think or I won't have any fingernails left. I've been known to chew on them while thinking.....


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #757 - Feb 3^rd, 2016 at 6:17am	Print Post
	I've been adding bits and pieces to the bloodbath as they come to me. When I've got everyone who is supposed to be dead, dead, I'll tie it all together. Writing this is kinda chaotic but since the scene itself is chaotic, I suppose that makes sense... Post # 37,037
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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #758 - Feb 3^rd, 2016 at 6:34am	Print Post
	Our Hero has no words for what is happening to him at the moment and frankly, I'm at a bit of a loss for words myself so I think I'm going to shut things down for the night and tackle it fresh tomorrow. Maybe inspiration will come after the situation has bubbled in my head overnight.....


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #759 - Feb 6^th, 2016 at 4:52am	Print Post
	Why do "things" come to me while I'm cooking, washing dishes or doing something that keeps me away from the computer? It is TOTALLY no fair!!


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #760 - Feb 20^th, 2016 at 2:36am	Print Post
	I'm currently trying to figure out how to describe a very advanced martial arts move in which the fighter leaps up, grabs their opponent around the neck with their legs and takes them down. It's cool as heck and perfect for Our Hero. Our Heroine too -- combat wise, she's the Samgaran equivalent of the MCU's Black Widow -- but he needs to show off a bit.


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #761 - Feb 20^th, 2016 at 4:10am	Print Post
	Our Hero... Should he or shouldn't he tear That Bitch's head off with his bare hands? Or would stomping on her throat and crushing her windpipe be enough since he's already broken her back and severed her spinal cord?


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #762 - Feb 20^th, 2016 at 5:03am	Print Post
	Went with tearing off the head. Now I need to fill in the rest of it which, the way I'm yawning, probably won't happen tonight. I'm taking my time with this to get it just right...


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #763 - Feb 21^st, 2016 at 2:18am	Print Post
	Okay, That Bitch is dead, the the gap I had between the tearing off of the head and Our Hero and Heroine rejoining the battle is closed. I still have some gap filling to do but I've got this death sequence pretty well figured out. And yes, tearing the Bitch's head off was very satisfying. Hopefully it will sustain me while I write up all the stuff that she'll be doing to deserve it!
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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #764 - Feb 21^st, 2016 at 3:47am	Print Post
	After careful consideration, I've decided that a couple of gaps could be closed without adding further text. I have three gaps that need to be filled with varying amounts of bloodshed so I figured that would be enough blood and gore for this action sequence. When done, this section will be 3� to 4 pages long.


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #765 - Feb 21^st, 2016 at 5:19am	Print Post
	I've closed another gap and dinner is nearly done. I didn't get too descriptive since it was a "simple" bare-knuckle beating. The two remaining combats should have some choreography in them and be more detailed. Don't think I'll get to that tonight.


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #766 - Feb 22^nd, 2016 at 1:08am	Print Post
	I'm currently trying to visualize a chaotic battle scene 'cause I have to "see" it before I can write it. That might sound strange to some but that's the way I write. The fact that the scene is a swirling mass of bloody chaos does NOT help. Orgies are easier.


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #767 - Mar 3^rd, 2016 at 4:33am	Print Post
	Skywise will be going back to work tomorrow -- he might be home early but he's going to try for the full day -- and since my worry about him is elevated I'm hoping to get back to work. I'm still worried about me but aside from telling the Universe that I will NOT accept anything but a fabulously successful outcome concerning these cataracts there isn't much I can do. So, I will keep my mind busy as much as I can and hopefully some of that "busy" will be usable new material! Post # 37,222


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #768 - Mar 5^th, 2016 at 4:05am	Print Post
	Our Hero just tore the throat out of a truly deserving person. I'll get to the particulars in a bit but now I have to get out of this chair and do something useful. Making myself some dinner would probably be a good idea too...... Post # 37,234
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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #769 - Mar 5^th, 2016 at 5:27am	Print Post
	Everyone has been fed, including the Queen and me so lets see if I can add a bit more to Book 4 before Skywise gets home.


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #770 - Mar 5^th, 2016 at 5:44am	Print Post
	I closed a gap and I'm going to quit for the night. The rest of this section is all combat and my cognitive functions are slowing down and I really should pull out my Krav Maga book (the one with pictures and exact instructions on how to kill someone attacking you) to polish up one of Our Hero's moves. So I'll see what I can do about writing bloody death tomorrow.


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #771 - Mar 9^th, 2016 at 12:32am	Print Post
	I've been working on one of my short stories and did some editing on Book 4 while I can still see. Yeah, feeling a bit pessimistic tonight. My appointment with the specialist is next Tuesday so we're hoping to know something by this time next week. I'm trying not to worry and/or eat myself into a coma.....


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #772 - Mar 16^th, 2016 at 3:41am	Print Post
	I'll be having the surgery, don't know when but I'll be having it so maybe now that the metaphorical concrete block is no longer hanging over my head, I can get some work done. Going over Book 4 tonight it has occurred to me that Our Heroine needs a magickal opponent that can really give her a fight, neither Lord Stephan or Allbane were up to her weight class. Athanasia isn't in her class either and knows it. She prefers "sly and sneaky" to open confrontation and "open confrontation" is exactly what is needed. Time to put the thinking cap on again....
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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #773 - Mar 17^th, 2016 at 2:17am	Print Post
	Still thinking about the new magick user I need. All that's set in stone is gender (male) and the fact that he's as powerful, maybe a little moreso than Our Heroine. I'm still throwing around ideas. Is he Godkin? If he is, who is his Divine parent? Is he even humanoid? He could be a lizardman but given the Lizardmen's racial obsession with ruling the world, why hasn't he taken over already? Could he be a vampire? If he is, is he a True Vampire (romantic kind) or a Demon Vampire (ugly/scary kind)? How does he come to Our Heroine's attention and how does he fit in with the rest of the plot which is pretty much set? I have a feeling I'll be trying ideas "on for size" for a while yet unless a Muse hits me on the head with a brilliant idea....


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Penthesilea Forum Administrator Offline Warrior Queen, DarkLady, Phoenix, Ghostbuster Posts: 47422 Location: The Castle..... Joined: Jun 21^st, 2006 Gender:	Re: Welcome to the Writing Life! Reply #774 - Mar 23^rd, 2016 at 4:36am	Print Post
	Well, one idea has jelled at least. The new magick user is one of the few remaining mages serving the Lords of the Outside. As such, I'm going to have to design a unique appearance for him since Outsider mages acquire some "disturbing" physical characteristics as they advance in their service. Right now, I'm thinking "octopus" with minimal bone structure remaining........


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